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I am noooo rapper.

Tue Jun 23, 2009, 9:13 AM
  • Mood: Love
I fell asleep the same way I woke
Blurry eyes and hands soaked
Thinking of the after whys
Thinking of your slow goodbye

I feel your hands along my face
Your tender kiss and warm embrace
Still I know that you're not here
And so I lay in silent fear

Will I get the chance to prove my worth
Even though she found you first
I'll put my hands in yours and pray
To sleep and wake with you each day

Knowing the way it's supposed to be
Knowing you should be here with me
I close my eyes again and cry
These tearful sighs, my lullaby

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Some cheese with your wine?

Yeah, so this deviant's name has been inspiring since I first met her here. :icontheafterwhys: Her writing is also absolutely incredible so if you aren't watching her, I suggest you get right on that. :)

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I know this is lame and cheesey but if you are watching me and you like rhyming poetry, I certainly wouldn't mind you fiddling around with it. :)

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:iconth3krimzon1:
.......You're actually telling me I can use that?? :wow:

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Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.
  /l、
゙(゚、 。 7 Kitteh!
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ
:iconpardonm3:
That is pretty kickass.
(pretty + kickass)

:highfive:
:iconflermigan:
Of course. Just hand me out some credit!

I am not good with the rhymes.

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Don't think cause I understand, I care.
Don't think cause I'm talkin, we're friends.
:iconflermigan:
Yeah? Ya think I should deviate it?

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Don't think cause I understand, I care.
Don't think cause I'm talkin, we're friends.
:iconflermigan:
3 S's.

I will. :)

I feel like it's so super cheesy!

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Don't think cause I understand, I care.
Don't think cause I'm talkin, we're friends.
:icontheafterwhys:
I think that little poem carries (perfectly) the essence of exactly why I named my account ~TheAfterWhys. You are brilliant. Thank you, so much :heart:

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Whats up?
But wishing stars,
and little men from mars.
:iconpardonm3:
Not if you think of it as a short song, which is how it came out in my head.
:iconth3krimzon1:
ohboyohboyohboyohboy

And thats crap, you are wonderful with rhyme. :)

--
Writers Block is my Arch Nemesis. It is Evil, and must be Destroyed.
  /l、
゙(゚、 。 7 Kitteh!
 l、゙ ~ヽ
 じしf_, )ノ

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Sat May 9, 2009, 11:39 PM
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:wave: :glomp:
Sun Apr 12, 2009, 11:29 AM
*liviugherman:iconliviugherman:
hello my friend
Thu Feb 19, 2009, 5:12 AM
=Flermigan:iconFlermigan:
shit and spits? neat
Fri Feb 6, 2009, 12:01 PM
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dicktitsclitsshitandspits
Wed Feb 4, 2009, 5:29 PM
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such interesting conversations get shouted...
Wed Feb 4, 2009, 2:09 PM
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AM BAAAAAAAAAAACK
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