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My lips,
quite literally,
burned that night.
I touched them as
you walked away.
You turned back,
blew me a kiss
and they burned even more.

I can’t pray
for this sin.
I can’t hope
for a fate
I am unworthy of

but I can dream.

I will dream
of fiery tongues
And wrists shackled
above your head
I will dream
of your body tensing
and those words you
always
whisper.

I won’t hope
for more than these nights
I won’t ask
for anything you wouldn’t offer.

But I will dream

of what could be mine.
©2009 =Flermigan
:iconflermigan:

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simple.

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:iconyouinventedme:
I will dream
of fiery tongues
And wrists shackled above your head
I will dream
of your body tensing
and those words you
always
whisper.


splendid


xo!

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:iconxxbehindthedoorxx:
wowo....wish it were me...sigh

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J'ai pensé que j'avais perdu ma mémoire mais je me rappelle tout
:iconmaimtorturekill:
im moved to comment.

so i will.


i really.
really
like this,
doe eyes.

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:iconneswanjeh:
am still reading it ....... damn ... if only i could phrase my thoughts like you do .... but guess this is the bless of knowing you


to explain more about what i mean and about how this moved me .... i have feelings for some one ... for many years now .... its the most painful thing ever ... i actually feel physical pain in my chest and in my heart due to the impossibility of us being together in any shape or form ..... yet she is the most soothing feeling ever .... don't ask me how or why ... i just don't know yet .... most probably i will never find out ... i figured out that this constant stir of contradicting emotions is the one thing that is keeping my soul alive

you expose so many things in me to me .. many times i was about to stop watching you ...

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look but don't touch, touch but don't taste, taste but don't swallow.
:icona-r-glasgow:
That is very good. It read so well, a good flow with an obvious emotional overtone. Do you post anywhere else?

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Thus does the necessary angel of the poetic, arrive to save the angel of history, from dying of melancholy in a suffocating world of ruins.
:iconstarlightandpoison:
so wonderful!

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i believe that my life's gonna see,
the love i give return to me.
:iconmarzguy:
I think its important tp push the boundaries, and then to relax them.

A comfortable read that conveys the message well.

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There comes a time in every man's life
When he's put enough vinegar on his spinach.

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