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We were just sitting there
And she drew wings on my back
Like she had a million times before
It was the best thing I had ever felt

Simple movements
Simple moments
You can't get those out of your head
You don't want to

You keep them there
For those times you forget how to fly
Pick them up place them on your tongue
Tell your story

It sounds so sweet
So romantic
But you know those are just words
They'll never know

Alone you close your eyes
Bring back the one time you felt perfect
It dances around like sunlight and shadows
The way memories usually do

Smile for what you had
Mourn all that you've lost
And when all that is over
Bring back your smile and wait
©2007-2009 =Flermigan
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the second line popped into my head. i liked it

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:icontearsfromleslie:
Third verse really touched me. Very beautiful poem.
:icon0nemoretyme:
absolutely beautiful

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:iconchattycat28:
there is much goodness here, I love love love the lines

Pick them up place them on your tongue
Tell your story

that is brilliant!!!!
:iconflermigan:
thank you so much and thank you for taking the time to read it :heart: :hug:

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:iconflermigan:
:) thank you, i'm glad you like it :heart:

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Don't think cause I understand, I care.
Don't think cause I'm talkin, we're friends.
:iconbutterfly-child-risu:
That's so pretty!

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:heart::kitty: 猫耳 :kitty::heart:
Like a book I have many pages, it's up to you to open your eyes and read the words before you otherwise those pages remain blank.
:iconflermigan:
:aww: thank you again for commenting, i'm really glad you enjoy my writing, it means so much to me. :heart:

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Don't think cause I understand, I care.
Don't think cause I'm talkin, we're friends.
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:hug: :heart:

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Don't think cause I understand, I care.
Don't think cause I'm talkin, we're friends.
:iconbutterfly-child-risu:
:glomp:

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:heart::kitty: 猫耳 :kitty::heart:
Like a book I have many pages, it's up to you to open your eyes and read the words before you otherwise those pages remain blank.
:iconfrazzled-mage:
No you certainly can not get them out of your head. Simple physical acts and events come rushing back flashing in front of my present all the time recently. This is a peace that makes me smile and fills up my heart with good things.

Well done.

jfk

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