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Fingertip-poise and blood-soaked confidence.
She tears through my skin.
And she strips me bare.
She sees through my autumn eyes
and she knows
she knows me.

I love her and I
like the pain she brings.
I adore the screams in the night,
the clenched fists and teeth.
It's comforting to know that only she
can make me feel this
blood-lust sort of pain.

And I've heard she breathes fire.
And I know what they mean when they say
she's poison.
Pitch-fork tongue and eyes a color
not found in nature.
She is just my kind of poison.

The way she leaves me shaking
with just her words,
just a little
token.
She is more than I could ever ask for
and something I will never truly have.

And I'll love her for the way she left me.
For the ways I will never leave her
breathing hard and covered in sweat and
wanting more.
I'll love her for never being mine.
She knows.
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shimmytwist Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
oh wow :*
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Well now you're just stalking ;)

Thank you :heart:
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shimmytwist Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
hahahha stalking's my middle name :D 
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
Well that is a very coincidental middle name :)
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shimmytwist Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014
it is indeed ;)
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maimtorturekill Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
x. 
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
:heart:
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BeyondJen Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:wow: Whoa. Okay so this is pretty much amazing, like a freakin' roller coaster actually.

That entire last stanza is just...heavy. The wonderful, dizzying kind of heavy with with a sucker punch to finish it off.

And this: She is just my kind of poison. Yeah. I know that.

:heart:
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012
:) This is exactly what I can't find anymore!! I don't know where the hell these words came from. I've become far too "nice" of a person. Ugh.

Thank you for this comment. I hope it wakes me. :heart:
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:iconbeyondjen:
BeyondJen Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Try writing with a few drinks in ya. I find that help sometimes. That, or writing in the shower. :O
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Real flirty on February 24th, 2012.
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:iconbeyondjen:
BeyondJen Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That was nothing compared to other stuff.

Now I want to know who this is about. Orrrrr, maybe I don't.  
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014
Maimtorturekill. It's fiction, hun.
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:iconbeyondjen:
BeyondJen Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I knew it was fiction. :)
Write me something, please. Non-fiction, please. 
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caybeach Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Featured: [link] :heart:
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AddiKay Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011  Student Photographer
woah, this is wow..
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2011
:) :hear:
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caybeach Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow, just wow. Great to have you back :heart:
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
Thank you, love. :heart:
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caybeach Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Anytime love :heart:
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sixtyseventy Featured By Owner Apr 16, 2011
Nghhhhhh I miss when you wrote all the time...
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2011
I miss it, too. Miss ya face.
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2011  Professional Writer
Holy crap, this is gooooooood. :omg:
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011
Thank you, sir ;p
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011  Professional Writer
;)
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anoddchild Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2011  Student General Artist
beautiful!
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2011
You are. :)
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maimtorturekill Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
i love you so much, you spiteful little hummingbird, you.

:heart:
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011
:heart:
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maimtorturekill Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2011
come snuggle.
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
YOU come snuggle.
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maimtorturekill Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2011
psychic snuggles. onetwothreeGO.
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frazzled-mage Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
damn fine. nice to see you again.
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vrkalak Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
Awesome . . . sounds like the 'old' you.
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cades2k4 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Professional Artist
:love: fucking hell, that's how you do it.....

I like all this writing recently
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011
Me too, feels good. ;)

Thank you :heart:
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cades2k4 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2011  Professional Artist
Gooood :) :heart:
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