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I waited all day for you to come.
Finally when you did, it was really anticlimactic.
Like you had forgotten all those things you said.
Like you had forgotten you love me.

I waited again for things to flow as they normally would.
That is a stream we never again got to, those waters had dried up
...dried for you at least.
In it's place a dark spot on the pavement, a stain you wish to forget.

As you spoke you laughed and cursed like a crazy drunken sailor, like no one I had ever met.
I didn't know you anymore and I know that's what you wanted.
Pushing me away to make room for normalcy, to make room for anyone that isn't me.

You told me goodnight and I told you the same.
A smile flashed across your face.
I've never seen anything so fake.
Like a casualty of love and war, my battle was lost.

I won't wait for you anymore.
©2007-2009 =Flermigan
:iconflermigan:

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I was just looking at photos and I just thought of this I guess. Having someone to wait for would be nice, but the thought of this happening is pretty scary...

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:icontinker86belle:
i LOVE this ...reminds me of a poem I attempted to write but got something else instead. the first paragraph really touches home. Its horrible to love someone and they not love u the same anymore. I think thats the worst kind of love, one thats lost, but leaves you waiting for a miracle. Or someone who acts like they like you then the next min acts like nothing. Great job :) <3<3<3

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~I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious! ;) :D <3 Tink
:iconflermigan:
exactly :D you totally get it, and thank you very much :heart:

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Don't think cause I understand, I care.
Don't think cause I'm talkin, we're friends.
:icontinker86belle:
yes haahaa sadly bc im still going through it....havent yet gotten to the part of letting go of that one person...but trying to bc every day talking to him makes me sad and thinking ill get that back seems slim to none right now :( although i still hope so bc he means a lot to me. Its hard...feel stuck in the middle but love ur work. :)

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~I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious! ;) :D <3 Tink
:iconflermigan:
Things will look up... "It can't rain all the time." :heart:

Thank you again :)

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Don't think cause I understand, I care.
Don't think cause I'm talkin, we're friends.
:iconrecklessdevine:
I love this :D You're awesome! :p Nice work. It always seems as if we are always waiting for something, but when it's waiting for someone to love you the same a day seems like forever... Fuck me and my emoness... :p Lol

~Heather

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"Enjoy life, there is plenty of time to be dead."


"Looking back, I have this to regret, that too often when I loved, I did not say so."
:iconflermigan:
ahah why thank you Heather...and yeah waitings the worst :heart:

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Don't think cause I understand, I care.
Don't think cause I'm talkin, we're friends.
:iconanoddchild:
very very cool.


i especially love the irony of the title.

because it's never fair.

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...we only begin to live when we conceive of life as tragedy...
:iconflermigan:
you pick up on everything don't you ;)

thank you for the comment :heart:

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Don't think cause I understand, I care.
Don't think cause I'm talkin, we're friends.

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