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I've fashioned eyes from barbed wire
and I poke through whatever I can to see you.
Through the streams
and red
and sinew
I will finally see you.
It takes everything
so I do anything.
Screaming from the pain,
the pain of being unveiled.
Hopping the chained links
and slicing through flesh.
If that's what it takes.
That's what it takes.
And I know what they mean now
when they say,
"once in a blue moon".
I mean,
I get it
now.
I get it
through you.
Wonderful colors just pierce through me
vehemently,
relentlessly.
A washing of grey and a stab of
yellow.
Mixed with the stainless steal
of my brown.
Our names are here
but we are not.
What better way to proclaim love than through blood and tears?
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:iconmatahariii:
MataHariii Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010
Just "pierce" through me. I am on to you Miss thang :) Well done.
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010
Hahahaha yeah you ah!! ;p
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Daiiara Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2010
god i love the way you write :heart:
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010
:) Thank you very much! :heart:
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raven-gc Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
simply captivating
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2010
Thank you :heart:
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TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010  Professional Writer
"Wonderful colors just pierce through me
vehemently,
relentlessly." :love::love::love::love:
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010
:D
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:iconthesekrimzonflames:
TheseKrimzonFlames Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2010  Professional Writer
:highfive: :D
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:iconmaimtorturekill:
maimtorturekill Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010
you wrote something.

sweet.
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010
I did write something.

Are you saying what I wrote sweet or are you saying like... "sweeeeeet".

I hope the former.
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:iconmaimtorturekill:
maimtorturekill Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010
both.
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010
I'll take it.
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leebeeloves Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
very moving! <3
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010
Thanks doll :heart:
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leebeeloves Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
:]
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010
=D
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TheAfterWhys Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
That would definitely prove it, haha. Doesn't make it any less scary though.

How've you been? :tighthug:
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010
:D

I've been so wonderful. How have you been, love? I've missed your writing!
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:icontheafterwhys:
TheAfterWhys Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Glad to hear it!!! I've been pretty good, busy, but good. I feel pretty bad for not writing for awhile I admit. :D
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sixtyseventy Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010
Barb, you're so weird. But I love it. :)
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:iconflermigan:
Flermigan Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2010
Aw, ya think I'm weird, Val?

I'm glad ya love it! :heart:
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:iconjysella:
Jysella Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
That was lovely. Intense and tender in an odd way.
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Zaphod-Beeblebrox58 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010
Blood and tears...the mortar that holds two hearts together...

love the last two lines
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Flermigan Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010
Thanks Jeff :heart:
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Zaphod-Beeblebrox58 Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2010
You are still my favorite Bostonette ;)
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